Editorial Report 13b

In this post I will talk about YET ANOTHER section of the project that changed from the rough draft to the final project.

Audience Questions

1. How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?
   •  I added information about the male speaker in the news clip.
   • I also added an extra rhetorical question about if fracking is really necessary.  This was used to help better define my stance on the issue, and make the audience think more about the cost of the effects of the earthquakes.
   
   
2. How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?
   • The form wasn't changed that drastically, but I think the additionalf speaking sections, help clear up speakers and reinforce an opinion.  The clearness of the speaker is also helped by putting the clip right before the speaking section.
   
   
   
   
   **Of rough draft, listen to 2:16-4:24
   **Of my final draft, listen to 3:02-5:15.