- How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?
- In terms of content, most of the changes were incredibly minor. Before, I was going to take a section out that explained what Boone Pickens gave money too and how he was a big philanthropist. Instead I decided to keep what I had originally said and then use my audio source to reinforce it further.
- I also added in a "booing crowd" noise in order to further convey my voice on the issue of Mary Fallin passing a law that banned fracking.
- How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?
- I also changed minor ways in which the audio was pieced together. For instance I tried to cut certain pieces in order to add more of a pause between speaking sections.
- I also added in a "television like introduction to the beginning of the TV clip in the section to add more variety for the listener, and make it seem more like a television report.
Here is the link for my audio. I am attaching the entire audio file, but the segment I would like you to listen to is 4:30-6:47.
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