Peer Review for Hannah Gardner

Here is a peer review for someone who I don't think I have ever peer reviewed before.

• The name of the title and author for the project you reviewed (1 point)
  • Peer reviewed for Hannah Gardner.  "Untitled"
   
• A working hyperlink to the project you reviewed (1 point)
  • You can find it here on her blog post. 
  
  
• An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed (1 point) 
  • I talked about the form of her project.  So the genre conventions that go with a video essay.
   
• An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how did you help them make their work better?) (5 points)
  • I think the suggestions made the project better in the sense that it could help her with the overall tone she is using. She is very formal, and since it is a self reflection, i feel it would be better more informal.
  • I also talked about not lingering on clips she chooses, too long.
  
  
• An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback (5 points)
  • In class, we discussed that since the self reflection is personal and should reflect your true feelings, you can take the liberty to be slightly more informal with it.  We want the real dirt!
  
  
• One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from (5 points)
  • I admired the fact that she seemed to have everything very planned out, in terms of the content.  She new exactly what she wanted to say about her time and learning experience from the class.