Sunday, March 27, 2016

Peer Review for Jack Auslen

In this review I will discuss what I have written for Jack's podcast.

  1. The name of the podcast is "Rough Draft" and the author is Jack Auslen.
  2. Here is the hyperlink to the podcast.
  3. I decided to do the "Make a recommendation about form" activity, which mostly involves me critiquing the conventions of the genre at hand (in this case a podcast).
  4. I think my suggestions helped his podcast in the sense that it mad it a little more interesting for listeners. 
    • His content was good and his sources seemed reputable; however, he only included voice.  He needs music or something else in order to break up the content a little and guide the listener through the podcast.  
    • He also needed a little more variance in the voice, which would also help keep the reader interested.
    • Another thing that I think would help would be a script.  Here were a couple awkward pauses that occurred.  Pauses are good in certain places in order to let the listeners breathe, but these occurred in unconventional places.  I think a script would help solve this problem. 
        5.   Once again, I used the characterization of the genre charts we developed together in class     and referenced the genre examples that we provided.  The examples that we were given definitely used music or other background sounds to set a mood or provide interest for the listener.

       6.  I thought that Jack's work was pretty in depth and provided a good amount of information.  I also liked that he was pretty conversational with his interviewees.  I personally cut out any of me talking in the interviews, just because I thought it sounded strange, but it seems to flow well in his podcast.

Peer Review for Tim Wils

I did my first peer review on Tim's podcast. 

  1. The name of the project (that I could see)was Project 2 Final Draft and the author was none other than Tim Wils.  
  2.  Here is the link to Tim's fabulous draft.
  3.  I chose the "Make a recommendation about form" activity.  So essentially, I just talked about how well his podcast followed the general conventions of a podcast.
  4. I think I helped make his podcast better in the sense that I made the audio of him speaking more cohesive.  There were certain things that he inserted into the audio that made it harder to follow.  I also think the suggestion I made about adding some music either as transitions or as background music will help keep the audiences attention.
  5. I was able to incorporate the information I learned from our given podcast genre examples and the characterization list we as a class made about each genre.  We constantly talked about how podcasts can lose the listener's interest when there is nothing else other than voice.
  6. I admired how in depth Tim went into his information.  He gave very detailed explanations about his examples, which is making me wonder what I can add to mine in order to improve them.

Reflection on Post-Production

Here I will reflect a little on my time in Project 2's post-production phase.

Audience Questions
  1. What were some of the successes (or, things that went right) during this week’s process work? Explain, with evidence.

    • I finally figured out that iMovie was not going to let my movie export, so I stopped worrying about that and just focused on the project.
    • I was able to figure out how to better time my recorded audio with my visual elements.  This way the audience is able to connect what they're hearing and what they're seeing better.  For example, in one part i talk about a mistake in the dancing and someone in the film makes a noticeable mistake.

  2. What were some of the challenges (or, things that went wrong) during this week’s process work? Explain, with evidence.

    • There weren't a ton of things that went wrong.  The only major one was that I found out I was not going to be able to export my iMovie, unless I made it all again.  And that was not going to happen!
    • Other speedbumps included, trying to make precise cuts to both the audio and visuals in order for them to run smoothly with clean entrances and exits.
     
  3. How do you think next week will go, based on your experiences this week?
     
    •  Well, this is the last week of the project and I'm not going to be doing a video essay ever again for this class (yipee!), so I expect my experience for next week to be a whole lot better!

  4. How are you feeling about the project overall at this point?

    • I'm not sure how I feel about the project.  I feel like I was doing way more on the formatting than I was on the content (partly because I gathered the information more quickly), I'm not sure what that means other than making a video essay has been pretty difficult for me.  I feel as though my examples are good though and that I have a good amount of information on each topic.  Since I videoed my interviews, it is also nice because I don't have to explain as much.  I use them for a lot of the talking. 

Editorial Post (2)

So,  here is yet another editorial post.  I will focus on smaller changes now.
 
Audience Questions
  1. How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

    • I have decided to condense the lines I gave myself.  What I was originally saying was too wordy and not concise enough.  What I decided to do was speak about the topics more broadly (with the exception of ethos, logs, pathos), and then let my interviewees (who are even better experts!) discuss the specifics.  This way nothing is redundant, and the viewer gets a more general idea of the topic and is fed the  details later.

  2. How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

    •  In terms of form, I ended up using numerous amounts of different dance clips.  I realized that most people don't just want to see images of things just pasted on the screen.  And since all of these genres add to dance as a whole,  I find it is acceptable to put multiple dancing clips. 

Author Response
Make a short selection from the “Rough Cut” of your project. If it’s text-based, limit the selection to a page or less of content. It it’s audio or video-based, limit the selection to two minutes or less. Create a working hyperlink to the selection, or copy ‘n paste it into the blog post (whatever works best for you).

***Because iMovie is STILL not working, I will not be posting a rough draft.  I apologize once more.

Editorial Report

In this post I will begin to discuss my time editing this project. 
**NOTE: I will not be able to submit an edited section, so I will just try my hardest to explain what I have been working on, and how sections have evolved.

Audience Questions
  1. How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

    • I was originally just going to show miming gestures while my interviewee was explaining miming motions; however, this began to be far to complicated to follow as the motions would be cut short and the visuals became rather choppy.  I decided in the end to take a famous miming scene and narrate over it what the dancers were saying in mime form.  You also see a whole section of miming, which is more common than just a single gesture.


  2. How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

    • Due to time constrains, I have also cut my section of choreography down to just mime.  This way I kept the length of the movie to a more appropriate length, and focused on a more particular genre. I felt like trying to tackle all of choreography in great detail, in addition to in depth information on resumes and Laban notation, would just be too long. 
    • I've also situated it so that often times music from one clip bleeds into the next clip in order to offer a smooth transition into the next portion. 

Author Response
Make a short selection from the “Rough Cut” of your project. If it’s text-based, limit the selection to a page or less of content. It it’s audio or video-based, limit the selection to two minutes or less. Create a working hyperlink to the selection, or copy ‘n paste it into the blog post (whatever works best for you).

***Seeing how iMovie is not willing to cooperate with me for this, I will not be posting a clip of my edited sections.  :(

Sunday, March 20, 2016

Production Report

Hi guys!  My production week posts are going up a little late due to being gone in Panama, but, alas here they are!

Audience Questions 

1)  How did you decide to use form to present your content in the raw material you’ve shared here? How did the conventions of your chosen genre influence your choices?
  • I decided to into a video form to use in the video essay genre.  However, I have chose to incorporate not only interview, but also use video examples of dance and use voice over in order to better describe the conventions and nature of each example. I find that dance lends itself particularly well to fill (it is a visual performing art), and to not use video of it and the gesture it employs would be silly.

2)  How did the production of this raw material go? What kinds of any hiccups, challenges, successes, creative epiphanies, etc. occurred during the process?
  • Honestly the video process hasn't been super successful so far.  I have had difficulty structuring the clips exactly how I want them (even though everyone says iMovie is super easy). My biggest challenge has been trying to figure our how to have my voice talking about something and then having enough video to actually fill that time.  I feel like most of my content is so raw and rough, that frankly I haven't had many epiphanies yet. With the time I've had, I feel like it's mostly just been a struggle to finagle with iMovie.

Info from "Content Outline" 


1.     Choreography


c.     Mime and Gesture
                                               i.     Helps portray a story.
1.     (Sleeping Beauty/ dancers doing particular gestures)
                                             ii.     Examples: The Unsung
 
The second portion of the rough draft that I am analyzing is the part that touches on the Laban for of notation.

Audience Questions
  1. How did you decide to use form to present your content in the raw material you’ve shared here? How did the conventions of your chosen genre influence your choices?

    • I decided to mostly use the interview for this section because there needs to be a lot of guidance and description in order to even begin to understand what Laban notation is.  I have provided an example that will show Laban notation and the direction in which it's read.  I plan on also adding a key and possibly reiterating and going further into depth on some of the things my professor pointed out.

  2. How did the production of this raw material go? What kinds of any hiccups, challenges, successes, creative epiphanies, etc. occurred during the process?

    •  This raw material, in all honesty is sort of slapped together at the moment.  I mostly had trouble editing the interview section so that things will flow and be more cohesive in the end product.  No epiphanies occurred, except for a couple small things, like figuring out how to make the camera pan up and down on an image. (Keep in mind my technology illiteracy).
     
Content Outline Excerpt


1.     Laban Notation (show examples of Laban Notation)

a.     Series of symbols used to record dance choreography.
b.     Rely on people trained in Laban recording (ethos).
c.     Symbols represent certain technical aspects (logos)
d.     Audience: people who are dancers, choreographers, or people who can actually translate Laban notation (not too many).
e.     Purpose: to help store and record choreography for future use.
f.      Being increasingly replaced by film.
 

Open Post to Pier Reviewers

Hey pier reviewers. 

Audience Question: What are you anticipating the post-production process to be like, based on what you accomplished during the production phase?
  • I think that this week is going to be very difficult for me.  I still am in a really rough draft phase, so I feel like I just have a ton to edit/swap around/add.  I'm very overwhelmed to say the least.

Author Response
Explain, with some specificity, your thoughts and feelings about the following:
  • Key information about your particular project that you would like anyone who peer reviews your draft to know.
    • If you're going to review this, know that there is information on my outline that is still not on the rough draft video.  There are reasons why I say this is a very rough draft.  I have all my content gathered though, I'm just having issues on how I'm formatting it.  Just judge me on what I have thus far.  Cool, thanks!
     
  • Major issues or weaknesses in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those weaknesses).
    • I know that not everything is present on the draft, such as specific sections of my explaining pathos, logs, ethos, purpose.
    • Know that most of my basis comes from personal experience in dance, as well as the interviews from my two faculty members.  I will "clear up things" and elaborate later.
    • I know that I am not good with computers and have never used iMovie in my life.  I know that it doesn't flow well and looks bad. 

  • Major virtues or strengths in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those strengths)
    • I don't think there are any strengths at this point, to be completely honest.  Maybe the fact that I found some good examples?
    • Mostly, I would like the editors to give suggestions on how I could more easily fill up my time with visual images, so that the audience can look at something while I explain stuff.  I don't know really what to do.

Reflection on the Rough Draft Process

Here I will further reflect on how the rough draft process went for me.

Audience Questions
  1. What were some of the successes (or, things that went right) during this week’s process work? Explain, with evidence.

    • Things that went right this week were mostly that I figured out how to copy and past stuff out of all the raw material and onto a "rough draft product." 
    • Another small success was figuring out how to use voice over and tamper with the speed of an image or the film.  I haven't figured out how to do anything much more advanced than that yet.
    • Mostly I have not felt that successful in this rough draft process, so I really don't have much to say for this question.
     
  2. What were some of the challenges (or, things that went wrong) during this week’s process work? Explain, with evidence.
    • My biggest problem has been attempting to upload the rough draft so that I can show specific sections of it.  Evidence?  Well, we'll see if it actually makes it on to the blog posts.
    • Another challenge has been trying to find images to essentially  be "time fillers" while I record voice over.  I've been trying to play with the speed of images to buy me time, but I'm not really liking that.
    • I'm still trying to figure out how to balance the amount of interview time, with the "me talking and explain time", as well as the overall time of the video essay. (Right now it's 25 min and I don't even have everything on yet. Great....)
     
  3. How do you think next week will go, based on your experiences this week?
    • Next week is going to be so rough.  Almost as rough as my draft is currently.
     
  4. How are you feeling about the project overall at this point?
    • I'm trying to stay positive about this project, and am trying to think of it as a learning experience, but I'm really NOT feeling good about it.  It doesn't help that everyone is just telling me that iMovie is easy, when for me it is not.  Also, almost everyone has been putting off the video essay, so I feel pretty alone being the only person who is doing one this week.  I can ask for help from two others, but they have projects to do themselves, so I feel bad taking away their time.  

Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Reflection on the Project 2 Pre-Production


It’s time to now reflect on this week’s (two week’s ?) pre-production process. 

1.     What were some of the successes (or, things that went right) during this week’s process work? Explain, with evidence.
·      In terms of success, I have learned (somewhat) how to use iMovie, since I am creating a video essay.  Before, have avoided ever doing this for obvious reasons (my lack of technology knowledge). 
·      I was also able to get two interviews completed in a fairly timely manner, as I was able to get them recorded by the beginning of last week. 
·      I also learned how to use voice over.  This is a huge triumph for me guys.

2.     What were some of the challenges (or, things that went wrong) during this week’s process work? Explain, with evidence.
·      Well, after my first interview my iMovie decided to crash and hide my recently recorded footage away in some remote place.  Little to say, I was a confused and greatly upset mess.  Luckily campus IT was my savior and found it stashed away in the depths of iMovie. 
·      It has been difficult trying to apply some of these concepts to genres that have no explicit textual or verbal communication (in my case dance choreography).

3.     How do you think next week will go, based on your experiences this week?
·      In all honesty this week’s production is looking crazy.  There are so many assignments and midterms that are occurring before spring break, and I’m having a hard time finding time to shoot footage and record voice over in quiet places.  I’m planning to spend a lot of time on the rough draft on Thursday, Friday and Saturday. I feel as though I have a lot of the information already gathered though and am pretty familiar with most of the genres, so I think actually generating the content into audio/video form shouldn’t be too hard.  On the other hand, I am still not as good at iMovie as I’d like to be, so the assembly portion might be rather difficult.

4.     How are you feeling about the project overall at this point?
·      I’m pretty nervous.  Making a good video freaks me out a little.  I could just slap some audio and film together, but I want to make it look as good as possible with the time I have.  The content also just seems to be strange thing to report, so that mixed with the unfamiliar video essay genre is enough for me to be anxious about this project.

Production Schedule

Here is a very general schedule of the rest of this production week.  There is no guarantee that I will go exactly with this, but the rough draft will be submitted regardless!


Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
Saturday
Sunday
--Gather book sources from library & figure out how to present them in the video.

--Maybe film in library study room.  Maybe at 11:30 PM?

--Going to need my handy-dandy computer.
I can’t lie; I will not be doing my draft this day.
I have other projects that are due that day.
--10:00 AM  Tape/ record book publications (if needed), record voice overs for certain video footage. (Dorm room or study room at the library)

--Shoot footage of UA dancers? (UA Dance studios) (using iPhone)

--Ask for dancers/teachers to send resume examples via email.
--11:00-1:00
Begin forming a rough script of “mime”. Compile more sources of Laban notation and begin a rough script for them.

--2:00 and beyond.  WORKING LIKE A MAD-WOMAN.  Figure out how to show resumes on video. Finalize script for Laban and mime.  Begin recording voice over for them, using iMovie.


--11:00 AM. Dorm room 311. Begin integrating interview videos into the rough draft and finding places where they are most cohesive. 

--Create some sort of introduction.

--Rough (really rough) draft before 8:00 PM.


I fly to Panama at 1:00 AM.

I’m leaving behind all of America, including this project, for 8 days and helping sick Panamanians.   

Have a good spring break! J

Friday, March 4, 2016

Content Outline


Below is an overall outline of my project.  This is a rough outline though.  Stuff will probably be adjusted as needed to my video making skills.  We will just have to see.



Audience Question:  How will I be organizing my project? That’s a good question, that I do not have a concrete answer to at the moment.  However, I plan on filming not only my interviewees but also classes and/or specific dancers.

OUTLINE

1.     Many do not think of writing and dance as going together; however, writing in both textual and non-textual ways are incredibly important in the dance world.  Not only are there multiple magazines and books regarding dance and it’s history, but in a sense choreography and dance itself is an unwritten form of communication.  Resumes are another written component of dance that are crucial for dancers going into the professional dance world.
2.     Books
a.     Dance Autobiographies
                                               i.     Relies on ethos (you want to probably hear about a person with experience right?)
1.     Ex: Twyla Tharp Autobiography. Gelsey Kirkland Autobiography.
                                             ii.     Pathos is often used, otherwise you wouldn’t be able to relate or not relate with the author(s).
1.     Past experiences  
b.     Dance History Books
                                               i.     Educate both dancers and non-dancers on the history of dance.
1.     Purpose was to create a book for this class. There was no textbook before.
                                             ii.     Relies on the ethos of the author.
1.     Example: Clouser’s   Looking at Dance.
a.     No index was intentional! (Purpose)
3.     Choreography
a.     Process of Creating a Piece
                                               i.     Go-with-the-flow
1.     Mr. C’s process
                                             ii.     Structured-Outline
1.     Michael’s process
b.     Dance Technique
                                               i.     Helps portray the feeling of the music (and possibly story if applicable). 
                                             ii.     Often uses pathos generated by music or specific images.
                                            iii.     The purpose behind choreography is often portrayed in the choreography itself. And if not, it is printed in the program.
                                            iv.     Visual aspect is often more engaging than textual mediums.
                                              v.     Examples: Con Spirito, The Unsung (costumes)

c.     Mime and Gesture
                                               i.     Helps portray a story.
1.     (Sleeping Beauty/ dancers doing particular gestures)
                                             ii.     Examples: The Unsung
4.     Laban Notation (show examples of Laban Notation)
a.     Series of symbols used to record dance choreography.
b.     Rely on people trained in Laban recording (ethos).
c.     Symbols represent certain technical aspects (logos)
d.     Audience: people who are dancers, choreographers, or people who can actually translate Laban notation (not too many).
e.     Purpose: to help store and record choreography for future use.
f.      Being increasingly replaced by film.
5.     Resumes (Supplementing with Michael’s interview)
a.     Formatting is important for audience.
                                               i.     Items often put in order of importance (ethos).
                                             ii.     List title of piece, choreographers, and your role in the piece (ethos)
b.     Content of resume is altered depending on what kind of dance job you will be applying for.
                                               i.     Example resumes
1.     Ballet, jazz, modern, theater, etc.
6.     Closing Paragraph
All of the above forms of writing and communication may seem rather unconventional compared to those in other genres; however, their importance in the world of dance is extraordinary.   For instance, without having Laban technique, many of today’s famous dances might not exist, or would not exist in their most true forms.  Resumes are one of a dancer’s best tools in an audition.  An affective resume can potentially cause you to be chose over another dancers in certain audition situations.  The choreography itself is so important because it is such a foundation of dance.  The process of using words and music to generate movement that is communicable and can address everyday situations and problems, to something that is purely for audience entertainment.   


**Examples and Their Importance
1)    Gelsey Kirkland and Twyla Tharp autobiographies:  One was one of the most famous ballerinas in perhaps the world.  However, her life was rather tumultuous given her many affairs and persistence drug usage.  Her book present a strong amount of pathos as well as ethos, as she goes in depth on her the story of her career and personal life.  The other is a world renown choreographer.  She has worked with dance in so many different mediums and genres.  Her book is incredibly detailed, and mirrors her style of choreography and her overall nature. 
2)    Mr. C’s book Looking at Dance: Also shows structure of a book, but uses less pathos than the autobiographies, since it is focused more on presenting facts (logos).  Somewhat like the autobiographies, we do rely on ethos to some extent.  Also interesting is that he did not include and index in order to get his audience, UA students, to read the whole book and not cherry pick parts.
3)    Con Spirito: Piece by Mr. C.  No intended motive.  Just reflects music and appears purley for entertainment.
4)    The Unsung (clips): Famous modern piece by Jose Limon.  Comments on the Native American culture and how it is slowly dying out.  Each dancer and their solo represents a chief.  Dance is done in complete silence.  Pathos is definitely present.  The image of each dancer rolling off stage symbolizing the disappearance is very powerful.  Costumes also, help with pathos in a visual manner.  Logos is also applied in describing historical characters and events.  Piece is very gestural.  The movements almost mimic that of tribal dances.  The opening of the piece is almost ritualistic.
5)    Sleeping Beauty: Classical ballet piece by Marius Petipa.  Employs classical conventions (which will be pointed out in my video) and various spots of miming. These miming elements help convey important aspects of the story to the audience that the classical ballet vocabulary can not communicate. 
6)    Examples of Laban Notation: Proves that choreography can have a language other than just body motion.  Uses extensive symbols shapes to record choreography.  Without it we would not have several of today’s most famous dances. 
7)    Resumes: I have not gathered specific examples of these yet, but I plan con quickly comparing different kinds of resumes.  Dance resumes vs. non-dance resumes, and ballet resume vs. jazz resume, etc.  It is important to show how sequence and formatting are important in dance resumes.  Ethos is greatly used.  Audience is an important factor; a resume must be adjusted to fit the dance job you are applying for.